Hello! In this post we keep talking about mysteries (chapters 4 and 5)
The ancient world hide mysteries interesting. What was more struck is how they inhabitants of the Stonehenge and Easter Island were moving the heavy stones and then were building, and the beliefs of the Egyptians that made the pyramids to honor and care for their pharaohs. Also the life in Atlantis and Nazca and if those stories are true or not.
In mind and body speaks of the mysteries as: people that handle objects with his mind, they who see the future, or they dreamed accidents that occur the future and as a person started burning for no reason, or as the inhabitants of a tribe walked about 300 degrees.
I recommend you read these two chapters because: You will see places that do not currently exist, such as Atlantis "the city disappeared under the sea" And meet interesting stories as "a young woman from Pirano in Italy that was sleeping and a blue light came from her body"
Hope you enjoy the chapters, kisses.
You wrote 3 organized paragraphs and completed the writing task.
ResponderEliminar1. It looks like there are 2 ideas here. How can you improve this long sentence: "What was more struck is how they inhabitants of the Stonehenge and Easter Island were moving the heavy stones and then were building, and the beliefs of the Egyptians that made the pyramids to honor and care for their pharaohs"
2. The subject of this sentence is "people": "people that handle objects with his mind, they who see the future, or they dreamed accidents that occur the future " However, you say " his mind". What should you replace "his" with?
3. Your second paragraph has one sentence. How could you rewrite it to avoid one-sentence paragraphs?